WARNING: IF YOU HAVEN'T READ PART I YET, I SUGGEST YOU DO BEFORE CONTINUING. PART I REDIRECTS HERE: goldenclaw13.proboards81.com/index.cgi?board=khawe&action=display&thread=1178593959
kthnxbailulzPsssst! Go down that way to read Part II commentary and Chapter IV!!!
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Kkz...Part II is kinda different from what I'd originally planned. So disregard the first post. And...I'm kinda making it up as I go...soooo....it's basically Kayrx's history, including where she's from, and the friends and family that came with her to 'The Void' after becoming Nobodies. So it's from a past perspective. Meaning, NOT PRESENT DAY. IN THE PAST. :gonk:
Which means NEW CHARACTERS!! YAY! There's also gonna be a lot of lovey parts. YAY LOVEY PARTS!! ...sorta.
Oh and there's kinda...songfic-ness in this chapter (IV). Meaning that there's a song in here. The name of the song used is the parentheses in the title. The song'll be in
BOLD ITALICS, thought will be just
ITALICS, and exclamations that should be noticed will be
BOLD or
UNDERLINED...or
BOLD UNDERLINE. Hooray for HTML! >_<
CHAPTER IV- The People You've Known The Longest Are The People Who Are Supposed To Be There For You When You Need Them The Most, Part I (Your Guardian Angel)
Fate's Ravine was a peaceful place, once. It was a small town at the base of a mountain that prospered for many years. But in the course of only one week, the lives of the people who lived there would change drastically...especially for the five friends who lived together there: Aryk, Akeme, Kenneth, Alex, and Rannea."C'mon, Aryk! You're too slow!!!" Rannea yelled from farther up the road.
"Shut up, sis! I'm on my way!!" the youngest cried back. In their happy lives in Fate's Ravine, Alex was the oldest, being five years oleder than Rannea who was two years older than Akeme, Kenneth, and Aryk, who were the same age, but a few months apart. All in all, they were all teenagers, except for Alex.
Aryk and Rannea had lived with their family until they died of an illness. Then, Alex found them and they began to live with him. Shortly after, Kenneth came into their lives, then finally Akeme. Their ill fates had brought them together as a 'makeshift family', as Kenneth referred to it sometimes. Rannea waited impatiently for Aryk at the door to the house they lived in. She finally caught up and they went inside. It was a quaint feeling place that only had two bedrooms, but they figured out how to make it work.
"Hey, kids!" Alex greeted as the two sisters tore through the living room, "Lemme guess...Rannea beat you here again, Aryk?"
"Sure did! I swear, she's just too slow!!" Rannea mock complained.
"Hey, I'm right here, you know!!!" Aryk whined, "If you're gonna insult me, at least have the courtesy of going into another room to do it!!!"
Alex and Rannea laughed, which only further infuriated Aryk, who went into the backyard. Kenneth was out there with his guitar. It sounded like he was practicing a song, so Aryk was careful not to alert him to her presence.
When I see your smile, tears run down my faceI can't replaceAnd now that I'm strong, I have figured out,How this world turns cold and it breaks through my soulAnd I know I'll find, deep inside me, I can be the oneHis voice was hauntingly beautiful, especially while performing a song that portrayed such sadness.
I will never let you fallI'll stand up with you foreverI'll be there with you through it allEven if saving you sends me to heavenIt's okay, it's okay, it's okayAryk listened carefully to each word. It was well-written and sounded like a promise to someone Kenneth truly cared about.
Seasons are changing and waves are crashing and stars are falling all for usDays grow longer and nights grow shorterI can show you I'll be the oneI will never let you fallI'll stand up with you foreverI'll be there with you through it allEven if saving you sends me to heavenCuz you're my, you're my, myMy true love, my whole heartPlease don't throw that awaySlowly, through some unknown power in Kenneth's voice, Aryk could begin to feel tears roll down her cheeks. She wanted to go back inside but she couldn't move, transfixed by the song.
Cuz I'm here for youPlease don't walk away and please tell me you'll stayStayUse me as you willPull my strings just for a thrillAnd I know I'll be okayThough my skies are turning grayI will never let you fallI'll stand up with you foreverI'll be there with you through it allEven if saving you sends me to heavenHe finished out the song with a final dramatic chord and turned to face the doorway Aryk was still standing in.
"I wrote that for you, you know." He said.
"R-really..?"
"Yeah."
Aryk couldn't find words to say. She just sort of stood there, still crying and wishing she could say something that wouldn't sound stupid. Kenneth walked over and wrapped his arm around her.
"I really love you, Aryk. I really do. And there's nothing you or anyone else can do." he whispered, "Whatcha think about
that?"
The laughed together, and Aryk finally found something to say.
"I love you too."
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(That means END CHAPTER I)
Well, I said there'd be lovey parts, didn't I? So don't sue; you were warned. 'Neways...the song, "Your Guardian Angel" is by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus. Here be a link to the song if you wanna hear it:
youtube.com/watch?v=jRehmX3zlwE...and no, the Kenneth in this story has no relation to MY boyfriend Kenneth. The only similarities between them are their names and the guitar thing. 'Cept I'm kinda guessing the Kenneth in my story is a better guitar player. XD I'm not even sure if the real Kenneth still plays. *shrugs* Anyways, I hope to have Chapter V up sometime next week. Hopefully. If all goes as planned. THE MASTER PLAN.
BWAHAHAHAHA.
Smile,
~Kyra
EDIT: ZOMG Chapter IV is...actually finished!!! I hope you didn't die or something, Kyle.
Wh3n'D th@t H@pp3n? AnD lYk...Why r u s0 l@m3?
Wh3n'D th@t H@pp3n? AnD lYk...Why r u s0 l@m3?
